Revising for Clarity - A Brief Interactive Tutorial

Introduction

What is Clarity?

• Clear, precise communication that facilitates understanding of unfamiliar material.
• Quality of coherence and intelligibility (Oxford American College Dictionary)

Why Is Clarity in Writing Important?

• Informs without confusing readers
• Maintains interest of readers
• Bolsters readers' view of the writer

What Are Some Suggestions for Achieving Clarity

• Avoid misplaced and dangling modifiers
• Use active voice instead of passive voice
• Maintain parallel structure
• Eliminate wordiness
• Avoid jargon when possible

**Please note: There is NO ONE CORRECT ANSWER.  
These tutorials will show you one or more possible revisions.**

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